Instruction: Change Word (CW) Wrong Character (WC) Wrong Sentence Structure (WSS) Wrong Measure Word (WMW) Eliminate Word (EW) Change Word Order (CWO) Add Word (AD) Add Character (AC) Eliminate Character (EC)
Please note changes made right after the wrong character or sentence. (e.g. 我的朋友有的ec一支笔。The correct way is 我的朋友有一支笔。) The overall comment is in the end of the revised essay.
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ReplyDeleteChange Word (CW) Wrong Character (WC) Wrong Sentence Structure (WSS) Wrong Measure Word (WMW) Eliminate Word (EW) Change Word Order (CWO) Add Word (AD) Add Character (AC) Eliminate Character (EC)
Please note changes made right after the wrong character or sentence. (e.g. 我的朋友有的ec一支笔。The correct way is 我的朋友有一支笔。)
The overall comment is in the end of the revised essay.
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ReplyDelete我小的时候，我的奶奶把一个小镜子送给我了wwo（送给了我）。她把她的小礼物放了在一个小箱里，过生日的时候给我了wwo（给了我）。它是一个扁平的，圆的东西，在它的反面都ec是用金色的金属来ec做的。它的半径是ec差不多三个ec英寸，比较轻的ec。镜子的外面都是黄金的, 有雕的图案花纹wss。因为它不是真的金子，它不是防锈的。现在有点粗糙，还有一个ew金属的ec味，可是我永远会用它。
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